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25 June 2008 @ 06:59 pm
Author: othfan_628/Adie
Rating: PG.
Warnings (if any): I'm  REWRITING THE ENDING OF CAMP ROCK. My grammer sucks, Just a FYI. I hope you guys like it. It's almost the same as the movie but I change it a bit.
Disclaimer: I do not own Camp rock or the characters.


Why did you lie to me?

I wasn't.

I can't believe that I like you. You actually lied to me about yourself.

end flashback.

Mitchie's POV

After the fight between Shane&Mitchie, she move back to the cabin with her mom. She's just staring at a piece of blank paper with a pencil in her hand. 10 minutes later Caitlyn shows up.

"Hey Mitchie! I'm just checking on you. Are you okay? You seem out of it."  she closed the door behind her.

"I'm alright".  I tried not look at her. But I feel her eyes are on me.

She stared over my shoulder. "No you're not. For one thing you keep writing 'Shane&Mitchie together forever' all over your paper."

I tried to hide it but it's too late because she already saw it.

"So what? I can't believe that he actually tells me how he feel about me. Now that I lied to him, he probably don't want to talk to me ever."

"I know, I was there. Remember? You like him don't you?"

"Yes, I do. I like him A LOT" I tried to a fake a smile just so to let her know that I'm fine. I look at her eyes and she knew I was hiding something. She knew a way to get it out. I look down. "I can't breath when I'm around him, when I'm not around him I wanna be; I'm just, I'm totally in love with him. And I'm not sure he feels that way. I know that he likes me but I don't know if he loves me or not."

"Are you kidding me? I've seen that boy looks at you."

I blushed. "Thanks for cheering me up, but I don't think there's anything to fix it.".

The next day, I have class and Shane is the instructor. I don't want to see him, not like the way he looked at me last time. I decide to skip it. Help out my mom in the kitchen. Caitlyn was watching me the whole day to see if I didn't break down. Brown and Tess shows up accuse me and Caitlyn of stealing her bracelet but we didn't. Brown wouldn't allow us to do anymore camp activities. He told us till AFTER the final jam. After they left, we can take a hint. During the mid afternoon, me and Caitlyn have been rehearsing about an hour or two for Final Jam.

Shane's POV

Today is the Final Jam. I got a call from Nate and Jason. Again Jason was asking about the bird house. I told him that I'm done with that. They told me that they're coming. I hanged up. I started playing around with the guitar but Mictchie is still inside in my head. I cannot get her off of my mind. I looked at the clock and it's almost 12 pm. I got dress and see Nate and Jason standing there, staring at each other having a staring contest apparently Jason blink and Nate wins.

We arrive at the theater. We sat at a table with microphones and lists and papers. I saw the first few performances, they're all good but I'm still looking for that girl with that voice. I pretty much put 7 or 8 for the performances. I'm still waiting for the girl but she didn't show. It's over   and I can't believe that I couldn't found the girl with that voice. I passed the papers to my uncle brown.

I heard someone shouted "WAIT!". I looked up and saw Caitlyn&Mitchie talking to Brown about letting her go on stage. Brown passes back to us the scores that we just passes to him. I was staring at Mitchie the whole time, thinking she looks beautiful.

Mitchie's POV

I saw the audience and it's scary. I look at the judges and Shane is smiling at me. He knows how nervous I get. After seeing him smiling at me, for some reason I got a boost of confidence. I walked in the center. I began singing.

This is real, this is me
I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me

I look at Shane again, and his face looks like he's in shock. I heard him saying that I'm the girl that he's been looking for. I tried not to get distracted and I continue singing my song.

Do you know what it's like to feel so in the dark?
To dream about a life where you're the shining star
Even though it seems
Like it's too far away
I have to believe in myself
It's the only way

This is real, this is me
I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now I've found, who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me

I hear someone behind me. It's Shane. I was surprise to see him on stage singing to me.

You're the voice I hear inside my head
The reason that I'm singing
I need to find you, I gotta find you
You're the missing piece I need
The song inside of me
I need to find you

He's holding my hand singing that song. It turns out that we're singing different songs. But it sounds good together.

This is real, this is me
Im exactly where im supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now i've found, who i am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who i want to be

This is me (You're the missing piece i need the song inside on me)
This is me, Yeah (You're the voice i hear inside my head, the reason that im singing)

Now i've found, who i am
Theres no way to hold it in
No more hiding who i want to be
This is me

At the end, he's still staring at me, with his gorgeous eyes. And yet he's still holding and squeezing my hand. I forgot that we were on stage in front of an audience. He starts to lean towards me, I feel his lips touching my cheek. It was a kiss on my cheeks.  He winks at me, and whisper in my ear saying "I'll see you in 5 minutes backstage" I smiled at him. I went backstage with Caitlyn waiting for the judges to announce the winner. I hear Brown announcing the winner, I hear him saids my name. I walk towards him and Shane. Shane gives me that wink again. I giggle.  I thank  him and  Shane. I walked backstage, I see Caitlyn flirting with Nate. I decide not to interrupt them.

I heard someone behind me, it was Shane. He grabs me and pull me towards him.He put his hands around my waist and stares at me. His hands is touching my face, I just stare at him like I'm in love with him, which I am. He starts to lean towards me. I felt his lips has touched mine. It was soft and passionate. I hear him whisper something. "Mictchie Torres, I am totally in love with you". He's whispering it loud that I could hear it. He had no idea that I felt that same way so I kissed him back. I broke the kiss and see his eyes are close and I hear a "Wow" from him. "I love you too." I kissed him again. This time, I'm kissing down his neck.

"You. Me. Canoe ride. Tonight." I see him smirk as he asked that question.

"It's a date." I smiled at him.

Later on me and Shane along with other campers performed  "We Rock.". I don't know how he does it but he looks sexy and I want to kiss him so bad. At the end, I stare at those gorgeous eyes and put my hands around his neck, pull him closer and kiss him. I kissed him like never before. It was hot under those lights. I hear the audience clapping and flash of light coming from the cameras. This will be the moment that I'll never forget.

I don't think I'll continue from there. Let's just see if this rewrite of CR is good. Then we'll see. 
Current Location: My room
Current Mood: anxiousanxious
Current Music: This is me - Demi Lavato
Tiffany: Joe/Demi Rock and Rollgydas on June 26th, 2008 04:58 am (UTC)
Loved it Adie! Very sweet! Keep up the amazing work! ♥
mrss. finn hudson: pic#75970623stateofmind on June 26th, 2008 05:04 am (UTC)
You like it? I thought is sucks because I never thought of writing one.
dreamsingr17 on June 26th, 2008 06:47 am (UTC)
Love it!

Why couldn't Camp Rock have ended that way?

Oh yeah, because it's a disney movie!!!

Beautiful ending though!
mrss. finn hudson: pic#75970730stateofmind on June 26th, 2008 04:25 pm (UTC)
Thanks. I wished I could write the ending of CR instead of the writers and the directors.
Aline: Shane/Mitchiea_liin on June 26th, 2008 10:16 am (UTC)
This totally should've been the way it ended*thuds*

Great job Adie;)
mrss. finn hudson: pic#75970099stateofmind on June 26th, 2008 04:28 pm (UTC)
Thanks. And a *thud*? that's what I call a success. Thanks.